Opposite Corners
- Khyati Rishi
- Feb 21, 2023
- 1 min read
We sit in opposite corners of the room.
You smile at something on your phone,
while I am swiping through my regrets.
You glow up like a freshly picked flower,
while I struggle to put the pieces of my vase back together.
You bubble up with laughter resembling a newly opened drink,
while my ears ring with the crashing of the bottle.
You're now reading for leisure
while I desperately try to get lost between the pages.
Our eyes scrunch up and fall shut in sync.
As I try to hold my tide of tears at bay,
your eyes shine with unshed mirthful ones.
We sit in opposite corners of the room.
Such a beautiful depiction of the range of emotions one goes through during a heartbreak or loss!
It is a beautifully written and moving exploration of the pain of heartbreak. The imagery and metaphors you used were powerful and evocative, and I could really feel the anguish and despair.
Your way of expressing complex emotions in a way that is both relatable and beautiful is just amazing👌🏼
Contrast explained really well!
I love this🥺